Feedback on roughcuts and improvements.

I was told that on my front cover that the Logo was to big and that i needed to reduce the size of the Font and size of my sub colour that i used as a banner for my logo. I also was told that i needed to reduce the size of my headlines and sub headlines as they were too big and took emphasis off the photo used on my Front Cover. So to improve my front cover i will reduce the size of the logo and it's banner, this will also allow me to organise my front cover better so i can fit more onto it but still not making it look cluttered. For my contents page i need to change the colour of the font used as it was a bit too bright and in the face of the audience so to improve this i will tone it down and make it a darker shade of green so that it doesn't contrast as much making it easier on the eye for the reader. I also need to organise my contents page better so that the black background doesn't over ride and go onto the side i used for my photos so no emphasis on these is lost. On my contents page i also needed to make the actual heading of 'Contents' more noticeable and make it stand out more i also decided that i needed to change it from red to green so it would fit the theme of the front cover better. I also need to refer back to real magazines more so when i make my corrections to my current magazine i will have a magazine open and then look at what it has done to be successful and then try and incorporate it into my own magazine. In doing this my own magazine will have more of a professional look and it will look more appealing to an audience to buy the product. My double page spread also needs improvements it also featured a similar problem with the font as the contents page so i will tone this down to an easier theme on the eye, but i will keep the same colour of green as it matches the theme of my magazine.